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Matt Elder
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Location: Sydney, NSW, Australia
PostPosted: Fri Nov 03, 2000 4:11 pm     Reply with quote
G'day Everyone. Been working on this image below (mainly the mouth, eye and nose area) and just don't feel that I'm 'getting' this digital painting style. Can anyone offer any kind of suggestions?! Thanks



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See ya on da flip side
Matt
http://www.mattelder.com
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Isric
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 03, 2000 5:25 pm     Reply with quote
Maybe if you gave him back his skull. Just fill his head in a bit, make room for his brain.
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Ecki
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2000 8:56 am     Reply with quote
Hi I think you did a nice job on the nose part and nostrils. But then it looks like your where running out of patience. You lost the back of his head and got unsure about the construction of the ear. Check your proportion, give him a bigger back of his head and model deeper with your colors like you did on the nose.

this is only my 2cent�s

all the best to you
Eckhardt
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shahar2k
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 05, 2000 2:51 pm     Reply with quote
the teeth are over the upper lip
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