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StormVermin
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Skagge
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nice style ! and cool background
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StormVermin
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| Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2000 3:01 pm |
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Vardelith
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| Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2000 5:56 pm |
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I like the style! My one major crit is the factt hat the shine on the hair don't match the rest of the pic! I think you should have used some type of hard edged effect like the shaddows etc.. on the rest of the dude! 
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Matt Elder
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| Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2000 6:05 pm |
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The picture looks interesting and is coming along nicely. There is just something that doesn't make it quite gel yet. Maybe the angles are too harsh and need to be a bit smoother or a black outline around parts of the character to give more definition.
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Pangaea Forever
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| Posted: Wed Oct 11, 2000 6:09 pm |
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Vector Graphics in the house!
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StormVermin
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| Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2000 4:54 am |
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Hmmm I like the outline idea - gonna do that in a few minutes.
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StormVermin
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| Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2000 11:01 pm |
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Here he is with 'fixed' hair and an outline.
Crit this to death.
[This message has been edited by StormVermin (edited October 12, 2000).] |
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StormVermin
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| Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2000 8:19 am |
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Ya thanks for the critique.
 Mmmm sarcasm. |
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| Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2000 11:08 pm |
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I like the angular (vector-ish) style you have developed with the coloring on this one.
But I'm not real keen on the background... it looks like you used the Clouds filter and then did a Radial Blur. You may think it's a shortcut to making something that looks neat real quick. But it really is only a shortcut in many instances and can only hurt the final product. Plus it goes against the coloring style of the character.
Try rendering a background yourself with as few filters as possible. They tend to be crutches. Just my two cents.
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Vardelith
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| Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2000 11:10 pm |
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I like the hair a lot better now. Not that my personal likes should make you decide one way or another!
A small crit. I think with the outlines you should try for a bit of variation on the lines! Not all the same thickness etc.. That way you can give weight to a specific point of the pic and use the outlines to convey things like motion, or to draw the attention of the viewer to specific points around the pic! Just a thought!
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Freddio
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| Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2000 2:37 am |
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Its Called "Cutout"
Filters>Artistic>Cutout it produces a very nice effect |
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