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Hightop
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 Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2000 12:27 pm |
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ok... since i'm not really advanced in digital art and still lurning alot i want say so much....
but heres what i think
for the first i think the glow on the moon looks good... it fits in in the picture...
and for the second... i think the text looks weird in the pic... it really doesn't fit in... maybe you should try another font....
or why not write the text on you're own...
but thats only if you write good.... (and not as bad as me)...
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ForgottenDavey
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| Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2000 3:45 pm |
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about the glow around the moon, I think the reason it looks a little awkward is because you outlined the moon with the darker line. Try getting rid of that and just make the moon real bright and then make the glow around it a shade or two darker than the moon itself.
That's what I think anyway. Other than that it's lookin' pretty good. |
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NeoFun
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| Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2000 11:36 pm |
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Okay... I started working on this pic/poem but the picture is bugging me so much I want to cry. The whole glow from the moon thing seems to simply not work... What should I do?
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