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Chapel member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2000 7:25 pm |
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I'm drawing almost every other day now which is cool. Anyway here is my latest sketch. Took me maybe a little over an hour to sketch and ink. It is NOT finished. I only spent about 5 minutes on the colors just so I can get an idea. I'm even going to do a background! Anyways I thought it looked pretty neat for "in progress".
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[This message has been edited by Chapel (edited October 12, 2000).] |
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Lukias Guest
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2000 7:55 pm |
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Please don't tell you made that up....certain parts of the anatomy are too.......precise?
If not, still a very nice/sexy picture in progress...
.....looks like my girlfriend....*ahem* |
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Visigoth Guest
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2000 8:07 pm |
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Dude, is it just my imagination, or does she have *no* labia? hahahaha
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Superbug member
Member # Joined: 12 Jul 2000 Posts: 544 Location: Canada
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2000 8:52 pm |
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Anoatomy is way too messed up dude. Like one
breast is bigger than the other, legs don't join up properly in certain places as visgoth has kinda pointed out...and the coloring is kinda flat. hehehe.... |
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Member # Joined: 25 Mar 2000 Posts: 671 Location: Thousand Oaks, CA
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Rinaldo member
Member # Joined: 09 Jun 2000 Posts: 1367 Location: Adelaide, Australia
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2000 9:27 pm |
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Looks good. the arm (her right) looks a bit short or could be that the upper leg is too long. the hips also look off, seeing as her shoulders are leaning to the (our) right her left hip should be up, thus her right underwear strap should be lower than her left. (I've probably got a few left and rights mixed up but you should get what I'm on about).
it's pretty hard to get everything right with the kind of line your using (not saying it's a bad choice but when primarlily using outline, flaws are going to be more apparent). if you put in some overlappiung lines to give form it might make things easier to understand.
Heh sory to give hard crits (I'm just getting you back for the ones you gave me ) you're getting some hard coments here, a lot of which I don't think are valid.
Lay off people..... |
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Chapel member
Member # Joined: 18 Mar 2000 Posts: 1930
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Posted: Fri Oct 13, 2000 4:38 am |
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Lukias: Yes, I used a pic to get the pose. I redrew alot of it several times till I thought it looked right.
Visigoth: No, camel toe! I'm trying to keep it clean. As far as the form around that area I'll straighten it out when I spend more time coloring it.
Superbug: I see my mistake on the breasts. I screwed up when I inked it. Thanks for pointing it out.
CapnPyro: ?
Rinaldo: The forms will look better when I put some time into the coloring. Look at the curve of the body by the way. Its a neat pose I think. Her right shoulder is leaning up towards the viewer and her right hip is supposed to be leaning down. The thighs look odd because I didn't define the knees right. |
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