[FatPenguin]

I worked on this image most of the day, but it's gotten messy as hell, and i'm too lazy to clean it up.



Those are supposed to be sidewalks built up the sides of extremely tall buildings. The idea is basically a cross between Venice, and the futuristic NewYork from the film 'the fifth element'

I like the basic idea of the city, and i'll probably have another go at it when i get a little better.

comments, crits etc. appreciated

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[X-pLaGue]

neva mind

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[Silico]

i like it! sorta gives me a dreary, gothic look... the only thing i would change(if i had as good of drawing skills as u) would be, have a little bit more to look at maybe? I dunno, it just seems a tad plain -- but hey!! like i said earlier i'm fine with how it looks, but the crit was just if you were bored and wanted to modify it in some way. anyways, keep your cool works comin!!

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[SewerRat]

Refine the wire things and make the sillouhette (SP?) at the top look more like one, then it'll be great.

[Nightime]

This is really nice, especially the angle and Dream-like quality you got going here, sort of black and white-1950s-depression.

It does need to be refined a little, particulary the figure at top and the walls on the lower left... but other than that, its superb =)

JJ

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