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Zor · Posted: Fri May 12, 2000 4:08 pm

I saw this face of this girl on my calender here (April) and thought she had a nice pose.. but the bad side is (or the good whatever way look at it) she had a bakini on, so a lot of this pic was my own mind.. but I guess u can tell what bits they are my imagination....

*ahem* Stoppit!!

Anways here she is.. not finished yet..

Drorak · member Member # Joined: 20 Apr 2000 Posts: 169

Very nice Zor...

... her left nipple looks like it's an 'inny' though.

samdragon · Posted: Fri May 12, 2000 5:03 pm

I would look back at that shoulder, it looks to big. My eye keeps coming back to the shoulder.
I would also like to see more of her lower body, it looks like you tried to squeez it all in because of the border, then again it could be the cropping. It just makes her leg look really thin.
Great job though! I like your painterly style.

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Zor · Posted: Sat May 13, 2000 1:07 am

Drorak: Inny

eh?

Thanks for your comments the both of you (sigh) what does it take aroud here thease days for ppl to leave you comments.!!!

anways tek it easy

Zor

Nex · Posted: Sat May 13, 2000 4:29 am

well what can I say.. I like it

The leg is a bit thin.. i agree on that with samdragon.

What I wanted to point out: You got a lot of.. motion going here in this picture.. I don't know what exactly it is but it looks to me like she is gonna move any second

Very well done

[This message has been edited by Nex (edited May 13, 2000).]

fragamite · Posted: Sat May 13, 2000 6:40 am

looks good, I think the schoulder is fine..

would be interesting to see the original photo

Binke · Posted: Sat May 13, 2000 7:51 am

Zor: We are lazy okay!?

Looks fine, cept that the shoulder seems to stand out too much.

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29A · Posted: Sat May 13, 2000 7:58 am

Overall nice, BUT

She looks a bit unproportional, the upp arm seems to be bulky while the waist and the thigh seems thin. Aspecially the thigh. The shoulder looks like it's broken

stands out too far in my opinon. The already mentioned nipple...

Otherwise, looks good.

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Zor · Posted: Sat May 13, 2000 8:48 am

wow u hate it!!

hmm I'll get me coat

Personally I thought it looked ok. but comments accepted thanks.

Must try harder

Lange_Pisang · Posted: Sat May 13, 2000 8:51 am

I like her face and boob(s)!
But you defenitely have to do something about the hair (it's hair, is it?). It look likes wet feathers or sumfin...

29A · Posted: Sat May 13, 2000 12:10 pm

zor: you know, critizing other peoples work is much easier than painting yourself...

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Alan · Posted: Sun May 14, 2000 2:02 am

I like the face and brushwork, and overall look. Although I agree that the shoulder does seem a bit big and the nipple might be a bit off, but I am no one to say others anatomy is off

Looks cool to me, all in all...

-Alan

geelimp · Guest Member #

I like this image alot Zor. Great skin colors, and the face is very good. I think the background looks abit 'cheap' though. Just an idea, but a darker background may look better..

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