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Dranime88
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 11:24 pm     Reply with quote
Hey, freind directed me to this forum. I'm posting some of my pics. please feel free to critisize them. i can use pointers too.







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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 11:30 pm     Reply with quote
Not much to criticise on the pics, they look pretty cool. Was it done in POV-ray? Incubus rocks
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Tinusch
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 11:37 pm     Reply with quote
Nice. Very moody and atmospheric. Only suggestion I have is to maybe fancy up the text a bit. The lettering is too intrusive, it kind of detracts from the overall composition. Just fancy up the text and those pics would be great.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 03, 2000 11:59 pm     Reply with quote
its not bad. kinda to much pink for a hell dont you think. maybe warm up the colours a bit. add more orange and yellow. probly best to get rid of the blue, but if you really want blue in the pic(s) i would suggest toning it down a bit. its to saturated.

hope that helps. you have a very good start.
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