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tanis · Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2000 5:57 am

Here's something that came into my mind and had to draw.. please comment and absolutely criticize

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C'ya!

Valerio Santinelli a.k.a. TANiS
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zapman · Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2000 7:13 am

Hello Tanis,
He He He that is kind a funny do not know why =)
Maybe because it has a cartoon look?

Few things to point out.
The umbrella has this WIERS that make them pop out you know what I am talking about? Maybe put some on the Sides poking out?

All males? Any point why?

Blue man's arms a little long (to me)

It looks like its only Raining in the background? No rain on the foreground?

BTW, I sure like to know why you made this image.

p.s from the looks of it, You must of did this image quite fast?

p.s.2, add more water on clothing, body.

ZAPmAn

Oscar Alexander · Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2000 7:19 am

I think it's a great illustration for a childrens book. Funny and moody. Zapman is right about the forearms though, they're way too long (there's enough room for two elbows)... try using a 'stick-figure' next time, just to get the proportions right.

Keep it up!

Oscar Alexander · Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2000 7:21 am

BTW, I wonder what The Spooge will make of it

tanis · Posted: Sat Mar 18, 2000 12:43 am

zapman: thanks for the hints!
hmm.. they're all males.. who knows why!? I didn't even thought about it while drawing.. I dunno.. :-?
I did this pic after watching outside my window for a few minutes (it was raining) and thinking about the people under all that water I came up with this idea in my mind.. I don't know if I'm mad or everything's fine

Oscar Alexander: thanks for the critique. I wonder what Mr. Mullins could do with this one and I'm almost worried about it. I could start shaking my head and crash it against the wall, you know

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C'ya!

Valerio Santinelli a.k.a. TANiS
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