[adamzhong]

hi i am chinease~and this is my work.
could you give me some suggestions?

[durgldeep]

Welcome!

First thought: maybe the forearm and head (lower right) should be a bit darker or higher contrast (spent a while 'reading' the image before I noticed them).

Second thought: with the light source the way it is (upper right) the lighting on the floor/background seems reversed, ie. should be more light on the floor behind the main figure (which would give it a bolder silhoutte and maybe no need to darken the arm/head?). It seems like light is falling on the throne, a bit less on the beheaded figure, then less again on the floor between there and the foreground figure. Unless there's a second light source somewhere in the background (falling on the throne)?

If the foreground guy is casting a shadow (on the floor), it would fall to the lower left and bottom (out of frame) of the image?

That's my (amateur) two cents.

[adamzhong]

thank you,i agree with u.