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damani221
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 Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 3:18 pm |
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http://www.flickr.com/photos/8313192@N08/2424503076/
this is my first post and i'm fishing for some honest critiques. i've seen a lot of work on this forum and i'm sure i could learn a lot from you guys. i'm gonna start posting a lot more as soon as i'm sure that i'm posting them correctly. anyways, be brutal! |
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Brocklanders
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| Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 5:13 am |
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nice picture. I really like the head. what i notice first is that he's quite stiff. the weight seems a bit unbalanced.
I would make the backleg a bit more streched out like hes more in movement. his arms could also be posed a bit more to support movement.
If its a concept you could try to push the design a bit more. add more bold design elements. it's quite an ordinary dino now (but a cool one) 
hope that helps! |
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damani221
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| Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 9:03 am |
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| you're right about it looking pretty ordinary. i can definitely push the design more. i'll try a few things and post it again. thanks a lot for the suggestions! |
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