[Urbatect]

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[Nebulus]

Very nice. The blood is very cool. I love the way it splatters onto the sign from the left and drips at the bottom, very realistic.
The text is really cool. I love the indentation on the I in the lower middle section of the I.
You know what would really make it cool though, if the I were a sword. As it is it almost looks like a sword all its missing is the handle. But it might be difficult to place and still avoid obscuring the Path.


Here's what I think would make it better:
For one I don't like the glow around the text. It just looks cheap.
I think the text should fit inside the placard. There's really no point in having the background frame if your going to have the text float ontop of it. The sign should wrap around the lower section of the I.
The golden frame should really stick out. There needs to be more relief.
The placard is a bit too symmetrical. The three encircled visage/figures, could be 3 distinct ones instead of the same one repeated over 3 times. The two bottom cicles could also have two different designs in them.

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[Nebulus]

Here's what I would do:


I really think the text should be embedded inside the plaque. So I alterned the contour of the frame and further seperated the two bottom shield away from one another to allow the Exile to fit in between.
I also slightly squeezed the upper "rainbow" curved section so that it wasn't too big. There would be too much empty space inside it otherwise...

As you can tell a sword passes right in the middle.
I've obtained the sword from:
http://www.gamemaker.nu/upload/image/FantasySword1.jpg

and supperimposed it on the T and I. I chose this handle because its extremity looks like a T. So that the sword can be a subsitute from both the letter T and I.
As for the rest of the handle extending over the golden figure. You should change the top middle figure so that you have a holding mechanism to latch onto the handle of the sword. As though the outer frame of the plaque was intended to hold the sword.

It would be cool to see blood splattered on the sword too.
lastly I added hanging ornamental balls of rope. You know the kind. Not sure if it fits the theme though. Just playing around...

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