[Lean Bean McQueen]

Done in about 8 hours straight.

[Sukhoi]

Hi Lean bean.

The drawing is very cluttered with lines, which makes it hard to read. Everything has the same importance...perhaps the guys and a couple of monitors should be brighter or darker to make them stand out?

Also conceptually is seems a little weird that he has both heads up holography AND monitors, and a laptop.

Phew, crits aren't necesarily fun

-Sukhoi

[Lean Bean McQueen]

Thanks for taking the time to crit this Sukhoi.

I have a long ways to go conceptualizing and inking competently. I'll keep your pointers in mind next time I attempt another vehicle related concept.

[Sukhoi]

It's basically a general thing. Make shure you know where you want the viewers eyes. have the most contrast there and leave the rest more vague. Either in contrast or in detail...or both.