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Soak
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 5:51 pm     Reply with quote
Hi i made an illustration of a yacht for a free project. [380kb]

photoshop and painter.if anyone has an idea how i could name this 60m yacht i'd be greatly thankful.

or has someone an idea for the 4 letters of "i.n.g.a" ?



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Jabo
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 2:30 am     Reply with quote
Looks nice. I love the yacht itself, but the background and water looks a little too rushed. The water in front is ok, but the foam at the bow isn't very dynamic. it could use some direction and contrast.

The background isn't defined enough to be recognized as a cliff (that's what it's supposed to be, right?). The clouds are ok, but could still use some work. Also, I can't make out the horizon line as the water seems to ends on different height-levels. Oh, and a the water could be a little more blueish.

The forecastle as some strange gradient towards the bow. But the cabin looks awesome. Very smooth and well designed.

Um's abzuk�rzen: Sehr sch�n!
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 11:55 am     Reply with quote
i really like the line quality. The boat almost looks like a painted 3D model.
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Sumaleth
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 4:59 pm     Reply with quote
A tip: wood paneling on boat decks doesn't usually merge to a point. Smile
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Soak
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 8:40 am     Reply with quote
ya you r right Very Happy but they dont alle merge to one point.

thanks for the critics i will try to avoid those mistakes any further.I am currently second term industrial design and have some time left.

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Elleb
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 12:01 am     Reply with quote
awesome boat, kind of looks like the Mark 5 the military converted. I think its called a Mark 5. Don't hold me to it.
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