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Funfetus · Posted: Sun Feb 20, 2000 11:07 am

...so make sure your mommy isn't around, or something.
http://funhousedigital.com/fb-gianne.jpg

This is a Painterized version of a life-drawing I did a while back. I meant to put in a nice drapery kinda background, but then I didn't, so i just posted it as is.

lemme know whatcha think.

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Funfetus
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Ko · Posted: Sun Feb 20, 2000 11:21 am

Nice painterly style...
A bit more refining/cleaning could work miracles

Ko

Joachim · Posted: Sun Feb 20, 2000 11:49 am

I like it !

Always nice to see drawings of the human anatomy, especially girls

Comment, if you wanted some

, her arm may look a bit thick compared to her skinny stumach. Maybe you could cut it down a bit ?!? Also, how about drawing a squeezed tit behind the nearest one, to get more depth (?). just suggestions, anyway... nice picture.

Keep it coming !

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Sc00p · Posted: Sun Feb 20, 2000 11:54 am

This is great, of course. very good figure painting

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napalm · Posted: Sun Feb 20, 2000 2:22 pm

fun!@# sup mang.. nice painting! the shading under the breast seems a little odd, theres almost a seam.. that cant be good

-- also, whats up with her arm? does she have two elbows or a really long and bendy fore-arm.. or are those two seperate arms? kind of hard to tell whats going on in that department. i love the face, and the shoulder/bicep too for some reason

let us know if you work on it some more!

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Funfetus · Posted: Sun Feb 20, 2000 2:59 pm

thanks, naps. those are two separate arms, but now that I look at it your way....ack! :P I think maybe I oughta throw in some of the left arm sticking out beyond the head to clear that up. i'll also rework the 'seam' on the breast. thanks a lot, man.

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Funfetus
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Funfetus · Posted: Sun Feb 20, 2000 3:37 pm

okay, made those changes.

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Funfetus
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napalm · Posted: Sun Feb 20, 2000 7:42 pm

can i keep critiquing until you tell me to shut up?.. need more posts to get that damn "junior" out of "junior member.."

Anyway, looks better, the arms are a definite improvment and the breast is better, only problem still there is that it looks as if she only has one.. I realize she is on her side and the other would be partially hidden, but it would still be smushed up against the visible one or the bed (or whatever that is..) - also the back of her knee, there is a weird unnatural arc that makes it seem as if she has a huge bulging thigh, its too low to be a buttock though so i think it might just be something you missed... i'll shut up now :P

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[This message has been edited by napalm (edited February 20, 2000).]

dennison · member Member # Joined: 29 Jan 2000 Posts: 247

WOW THANKS FOR THE PRON!!!

is it me or does the left thigh seem a bit out of proportion? i think you should slim it down a little

anyway nice paint job ff.. love those colours!

background could be nicer.. add like a pillow and make her look like she's sleeping or something