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MidNite junior member
Member # Joined: 08 Feb 2000 Posts: 23 Location: Florence, AL, USA
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Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2000 6:57 pm |
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Here's another try. I did this one based on a print I did about 9 years ago (which was followed by an oil painting about 4 years after that) It's got something about it that doesn't "feel" quite right, but I can't think of what....I do think I need to add more details, like wrinkles.
http://home.hiwaay.net/~harriett/art_wizard.jpg
Thanks all.
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Drunken Monkey Guest
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Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2000 8:12 pm |
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hands are too small.
if you place your hand on your face vertically it should be the exact same lenght as from the hairline to the chin. |
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Aiko Ito member
Member # Joined: 05 Feb 2000 Posts: 63 Location: Vancouver BC
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Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2000 8:19 pm |
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Aah fix the eye please! The one on the right should be a little more on the same level, and not that small. The nose is great, they're hard to accomplish. The sphere or globe is also working well with the hand.
Also the lips look a little strange are they slightly parted?
I think more wrinkles and texture would be a nice touch too
Keep working on it...
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n8 member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 791 Location: Sydney, NSW, Australia
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Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2000 5:18 am |
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ok...first of all....mr monkey...u should stop drinking, u got really big hands!!
and now to the pic....his left side of the face looks (to me) looks like its in a diff perspective to the right side....i just think u need to curl the fingers abit more and highlight more of his face....thats my opinion nywho....listen or dun listen...das jus wot i think...but other than that...brilliant pic =) |
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MidNite junior member
Member # Joined: 08 Feb 2000 Posts: 23 Location: Florence, AL, USA
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Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2000 5:52 pm |
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I see what you mean, I'll work on it some more.
"Brilliant pic" is that sorta like "I look exactly like Cindy Crawford, well except I weigh 50 pounds more, have red hair, flat chested, a big nose, and green eyes.....but other than that, I do look just like her" HEHE!
JK Thanks for the comments. |
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