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quanquan
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 29, 2006 4:13 am     Reply with quote
First here,
please give us more. Thank you.


Painting properly, the website will have almost techniques?
(English is poor, so we still see my paintings? �� , ... Rolling Eyes )



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PostPosted: Wed Mar 29, 2006 10:15 pm     Reply with quote
wow nice painting
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 9:31 am     Reply with quote
well, the image looks nice on first glance but problems become apparent when u look at it for a few longer seconds.

1- her right arm see,s like it ends where the elbow should be. it doesnt look like it's bent or anything.
2- her left arm doesnt seem like it's in a pocket. it looks like her fingers are cut off. it should be either deep in the pocket or completely outside the pocket.
3- the mix of colors is cool but theer are areas where your lack of control over the water color is too obvious and that happens where u put too much color of dofferent tones in the same place before the previous color dries. u should wait until one layer of color is COMLETELY dry before coloring with another layer on top of it. it gives different results that u may or may not like. try it to prevent mod-like spirals of colors (like on her shirt).
4- her dress on the button is being cut by the end of the paper. it seems random and un-proffetional (like u didnt intend to do it thus it's out of your control. maybe making the lines dissappear closer to the end of the paper can make it look like u never intended to do the legs instead of how it looks like now - like u wanted to do the feet but ran out of paper space.

those are just my opinions and u can completely ignore me. i wont get offended and cry to mom. just my 2 cents.

water color are really hard to master. it takes a lot of practice. practice more and post more stuff. i'd like to see them
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quanquan
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 3:26 pm     Reply with quote
topeira wrote:
well, the image looks nice on first glance but problems become apparent when u look at it for a few longer seconds.

1- her right arm see,s like it ends where the elbow should be. it doesnt look like it's bent or anything.
2- her left arm doesnt seem like it's in a pocket. it looks like her fingers are cut off. it should be either deep in the pocket or completely outside the pocket.
3- the mix of colors is cool but theer are areas where your lack of control over the water color is too obvious and that happens where u put too much color of dofferent tones in the same place before the previous color dries. u should wait until one layer of color is COMLETELY dry before coloring with another layer on top of it. it gives different results that u may or may not like. try it to prevent mod-like spirals of colors (like on her shirt).
4- her dress on the button is being cut by the end of the paper. it seems random and un-proffetional (like u didnt intend to do it thus it's out of your control. maybe making the lines dissappear closer to the end of the paper can make it look like u never intended to do the legs instead of how it looks like now - like u wanted to do the feet but ran out of paper space.

those are just my opinions and u can completely ignore me. i wont get offended and cry to mom. just my 2 cents.

water color are really hard to master. it takes a lot of practice. practice more and post more stuff. i'd like to see them



Thank you for your comments. On the need to strengthen the physical aspect does! Water is the same. 。
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 1:51 am     Reply with quote
new paint{My English is poor. Please friends, is simple to some} Razz

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 01, 2006 12:23 am     Reply with quote
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