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stalka junior member
Member # Joined: 31 Mar 2006 Posts: 1 Location: South Africa
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Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 2:12 am |
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I have added some new pictures to my gallery , let me know what you think of them..
Balance
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Broken Wings
Prisons in my mind
If you would like to see more images please visit my gallery it has just been updated.www.blackrust.com _________________ You create your own reality |
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quanquan junior member
Member # Joined: 28 Mar 2006 Posts: 5
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Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 9:12 am |
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wow good work! _________________ I think... |
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bijarts junior member
Member # Joined: 01 Jan 2005 Posts: 11 Location: Colorado
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Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 9:27 am |
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Very nice use of texture and lighting- I like the gothic emotive feel:) _________________ :::::::bijarts.com::::::: |
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faeklone member
Member # Joined: 03 Apr 2002 Posts: 215 Location: Calgary
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Posted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 4:28 pm |
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I love the silhouette look of these pieces. Really nice.
The only crit I would give on these images is that they feel too bland to me due a bit to composition.
First off center weighting your images is only really a good idea when you have soemthing to draw your eye to the object to break up the momotony of the center weighted object. The rule of thirds helps to make a picture more dynamic and allows a more interesting view. An example would be in the second picture where the picture can be cropped on the right closer to the figure, and even our perspective changed a bit so that there's more room on the left of the picture, and the wing at the bottom is more in the frame and perhaps more defined and the missing piece of the statue.
Secondly is kinda what I touched on in my exapmle. And since this is a crit you can take it or leave it. However in the two bottom pics you could possibly figure out a better position to view the figure from. On the bottom piece, what's the most important part of the piece? The room, the figure, or the fact that the figure is a permanent piece of the floor. in either case you would treat the same setup in different ways.
Lastly the cracks in the stone of the figures in believable in the bottom one, but the middle one looks like lines painted on a figure. Whatever you did in the bottom one, do it again for the middle one. _________________ "It's not the tools you use but how you use them that counts." |
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