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Psychon junior member
Member # Joined: 22 Feb 2003 Posts: 24
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Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2005 5:23 pm |
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Potential mod main character concept. What do you guys think?
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insane007 member
Member # Joined: 28 Feb 2003 Posts: 93
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Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 2:52 pm |
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I don't think he is very original looking, I also feel his face needs lots of work.
I like your coloring. |
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 3:35 am |
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the third is too much like (angel, the vampire)
i think you should change the concept |
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Godwin member
Member # Joined: 24 Apr 2002 Posts: 701 Location: Singapore
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 7:13 am |
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They're all the same guy only with more clothes on, why does putting on a trenchcoat suddenly make him look like a TV show character? lol
I think it's better to provide constructive technical feedback rather than to tell people to "change the concept", I believe his mod team will go through that with him.
Personally, I feel that the guy looks a little stiff, and the right arm and shoulder seems a little too bulging. I don't see guys so muscular everyday though, and haven't exactly studied anything like that before, so I may be wrong.
It seems like the concepts are to convey the clothes the character wears, and I think you've done that rather well, maybe you can draw more that'll convey a certain attitude and mindset of the character and so on _________________ Derelict Studios|Godwin's Space |
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Psychon junior member
Member # Joined: 22 Feb 2003 Posts: 24
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Posted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 9:08 pm |
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Thanks guys.
Yes, I was trying out different styles of cloathing that might work with the character. I'm still working up a couple more but I agree with what Godwin had to say about trying to convey a certain attitude and mindset so I'll be working on that. _________________ Psychon |
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