Sijun Forums :: View topic - Environment-The Gyre Tree

SquarePixel · member Member # Joined: 06 Sep 2005 Posts: 64

hello everyone,

This piece was set on a time limit to complete an image in 4 hours with a huge tree. This was based on finding composition and story telling. This is my first post,I hope you like it. Comments are more than welcome. Thanks!

Psychon · junior member Member # Joined: 22 Feb 2003 Posts: 24

I really like this piece. Very good use of brush strokes and I like the overall composition. The one thing I'll point out is that the character seems really stiff and the flow of the cloth doesn't feel natural either.
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Naeem · Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2005 1:21 pm

great work
im really diggin the tree. however, the guy isn't done too greatly.
but great colors and work! keep it up
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SquarePixel · member Member # Joined: 06 Sep 2005 Posts: 64

Thanks alot for the feedback annisahmad and Psychon,

Im really glad you like this piece, about the character, you are very right about him being alittle off and the cloth does look a little weird, thanks for the critque guys, ill be sure to clean that up in the composition.

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the tree is cool \and i like the lighting& shadow effects
about the man, i think if you add just more depth details it'll be better