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PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2005 11:51 pm     Reply with quote
For Job ...
Experimenting a new technic for increase the production speed. Quite interresting to do ... Wink


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PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 12:10 am     Reply with quote
Greetings P-Rik,

I like your results and that you posted a progression. Could you give us a little more about the increase in production speed? I may be thick but I'm not seeing what you mean in the image series.

TIA
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 12:16 am     Reply with quote
I really love your colouring P-Rik. always so fresh.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 2:36 am     Reply with quote
Nice one, but it looks too rough for me on various parts i.e. the faces.
In my eyes the cat is "clean enough".
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 4:41 am     Reply with quote
nmmh imo you used too much dodge and some of your strokes are too slappy...

the bunny looks sweet... uhm, the bunny withe the glasses i mean Smile
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 5:59 am     Reply with quote
I think the dodge and somewhat excessive "blooming" lends to the alice in wonderland idea?

Alice's face and certain other areas could definitely use some cleaning up though
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 6:14 am     Reply with quote
Thanks a lot for the comments.

About the "loose" part, don't forget that the result will be print in 10.5cm * 10.5 cm.
I think it's enough sharp for that format.
And about some other loosy part, i really want to have a digital paint look.

Thrush >> Thanks ! I just want to show the biggest phase of the realisation :
- a first rough line art with the first colours
- more colours over the dark line and more details
- shadows, sharpness, highlights and deeper
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 18, 2005 6:30 am     Reply with quote
the colors are alive and fun and the atmosphere is fun and suits the subject.
i think u could use more focus in the picture by adding more details in the faces of whatever u think the focus should be on. and more contrast.
leave the rest sketchy. just 30 more minutes into that piece.

overall, when it's small and the sloppy parts and less significant it looks sweet
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