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Member # Joined: 07 Oct 2003 Posts: 235
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Posted: Mon Aug 08, 2005 1:43 pm |
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Yeah, I'm not really sure what to say. I like the texture on the neck, where it is textured. The horn seems to be the most off to me. It doesn't seem connected to teh rest of the picture. The neck also looks too thick, like he's swallowing an egg or something. And the body (I think) probably wouldn't go up like that (like another egg, lol), but would just be more of a straight line at the top and then go down for the chest and whatnot. The shoulderblades might stick out a bit, but that's it. Also, there is a much different texture on the snout than on the rest of the dragon. It's smooth instead of hairy. I can see the nose itself being smooth, but I think the cheeks would remain with hair. Oh, and some reflected light on the horn would help, too.
One piece of advice I can give you, that I only learned for myself recently (hehe) is to not be such a smudge whore, lol. Don't be afraid of some hard lines. Like, the horn for example. It looks very smudgy and bumpy. Just take an airbrush and do a nice clean sweep over the bottom and top,and it'll look better. And like, for the nostril, that could se more definition. Actually, you don't look so bad in that department. Just the horn really reminds me of my smudgey days. Okay, so maybe you're not quite a smudge whore.
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