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CoreyArt
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 17, 2005 5:51 pm     Reply with quote


Just a picture I made
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choboroy
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 4:36 am     Reply with quote
I'm inclined to say Shocked woah. Nice palette, nice woman, nice birds. Great detailing too. Only thing I can say is maybe chop off some of the right side to get a better composition, since atm, she is placed directly in the centre. Anyway, I love it Very Happy
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Naeem
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 7:02 am     Reply with quote
i agree with choboroy!
beautiful work. really like the palette.
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igino
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 18, 2005 7:30 am     Reply with quote
Shocked really like the composition in this one! I think it even your best painting so far. I checked out your website - beautiful work! Especially the animations won my heart - fantastic stuff.
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gLitterbug
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 2:31 pm     Reply with quote
Grand piece. Great lighting, superb pose, and I totally love her face and expression. Everything is just awesome in it.
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ElfGirlKimmy
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 9:30 am     Reply with quote
I agree with the composition comments about possibly cropping the right side some. Also... Are those birds cardinals? Cuz if they are, the closer ones (the red one and the one on her knee) seem a little too big compared to the girl. That's really my only crit in this piece, and that may even be more of my own opinion than anything.

This piece is simply gorgeous overall. Love the lighting and the position/expression of the girl. Soooo pretty.
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