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scallywag member
Member # Joined: 24 Jul 2003 Posts: 105 Location: Bristol, UK
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Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2005 10:33 am |
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Hi all, I've been staring at this too long, is the perspective on the background completely wacked with respect to the figures, and if so could anyone suggest a fix? Thanks.

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Sumaleth Administrator
Member # Joined: 30 Oct 1999 Posts: 2898 Location: Australia
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Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2005 5:11 pm |
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To me it looks like your horizon line should be a lot lower to match the people. And I think the lens should be a lot "flatter", meaning the perspective would be flattened out (ie. vanishing points a lot further apart, and the distance should appear closer). _________________ Art Links Archive -- Artists and Tutorials |
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scallywag member
Member # Joined: 24 Jul 2003 Posts: 105 Location: Bristol, UK
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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 10:39 am |
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Thanks Sumaleth, that was handy advice. I only altered the perspective a little along the lines you suggested but I'm much happier with it.
Also resized a few body parts until I was happy, now doing some rendering.
Any other comments welcome.
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Godwin member
Member # Joined: 24 Apr 2002 Posts: 701 Location: Singapore
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Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 8:05 am |
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still looks kinda strange, from this perspective it looks more like a top-down view at the position of the dancers, but I'm not sure, might want to replace them with simple blocks or something to be sure _________________ Derelict Studios|Godwin's Space |
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