[kdeezy]

well this was a project for my grade 12 art class, feel free to tear it apart with ur critiques.

[cheney]

The image looks ok. It feels very desolate, empty, and dead like the moon. I have no idea what is going on with the small structre located in the center on that railing.
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[insane007]

definatly save your jpeg with a higher quality. You might want to try sharpening up your clouds, they look a little blurry. A bit of the structure doesnt seem to make sense, but kudus I like the creativy that went into it, even if it was hard to expess in paint Nice forground / cliffs and ravenes. The character seems to have a story, is he searching for a rare stone? Looking for human life after an earthquake/ bombardement? interesting.

[kdeezy]

well atleast the whole idea of a desolate and barren future got through:)


as for the structure , it is well like a giant hanging city..... as for the dude hes just out for some treasure hunting with his lil detector thingy.


I got to a point with this project where i just said fuck it and went ahead and finished it instead of labouring over details. I could probably fix things up with the building but meh.

cheney im wondering what exactly are u referring to in the center of which building.

and thanks for the comments.

[insane007]

his talking aobu the structure on the left hand upper side of the ring.

I thought the structure was a destroyed bridge of some kind. It definatly confused me, after another look, I see some cool detail taht I missed because I was so pissed at how "Jpeggy" the saved file looks, you should repost it witha "save to web" with maximum detail.

[kdeezy]

oh i see, i just converted my main psd image into a jpeg with imageready .... there isnt an option for a jpeg "save to web" so if u could point me in the right direction i will do that and re-upload.

[insane007]

"save as"
then select JPEG as the type.
Put compression to really low
and quality to maximum.