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Phire
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Joined: 09 Dec 1999
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Location: New York

PostPosted: Wed Jan 26, 2000 8:06 pm     Reply with quote
Well i've been working constantly fiddling around with the methods in Dhabih's tutorial. I must say the original sketch was excellent to work with. I resized the original Sketch (Which Isn't mine By the way, cant sketch with a mouse) to 1600x1200 and started that way, resized it down and use a sharpen filter and added "Screen" to it so it made the colors more vibrant. I must say it was a real bitch trying to smudge in that resoultion, it was lagging like crazy on my 433 128mb ram. As you can also see i didnt get to finish that leaf decoration on her head.

Anyway here's the finished picture:



And the original sketch, i couldnt read the name on it :P:




[This message has been edited by Phire (edited January 26, 2000).]
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Oscar Alexander
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Location: Amersfoort, the Netherlands

PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2000 2:29 am     Reply with quote
Looks nice, even though some parts look a little too 'drawn', such as the lower lip and the leaves in her hair. If I was allowed to give you some constructive advice, I'd say:


  • Darken the eyeballs a little (a bit too white).
  • Lighten the left side of the forehead, cheeks, nose and shoulder.
  • Apply hightlights on the leaves (dodge-tool set to 'hightligh').
  • Use the sponge tool on the lower lip (slightly).


Try it, post it. I hope this comment was of any help Once again, nice work!
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Kewldezigns
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2000 3:10 am     Reply with quote
Very nice start on your picture. I agree with what Oscar has to say. Keep up the good work and post the finished product when you're done. Can't wait
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micke
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2000 8:48 am     Reply with quote
I agree with Oscar too.

Nice work there!

-Micke
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Mongoose
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2000 11:33 am     Reply with quote
You are definitely improving -- keep it up!
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