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remic20
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 6:36 am     Reply with quote


used painter 8
i think i need help on body forms..
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remic20
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 17, 2004 7:34 am     Reply with quote
no comment?? Sad
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Yarik
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 17, 2004 11:04 am     Reply with quote
Tell us what you want to crit on.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 17, 2004 1:27 pm     Reply with quote
- i would change the position of the head/eyes of the dragon: it doesn't look like the dragon's regarding the human..
- maybe you could add some fire coming outside the mouth of the dragon..
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 18, 2004 12:10 am     Reply with quote
The dragons head seems disembodied. Also the light source is undefined. I do like the angle of the composition and the body of the giant statue. If this is supposed to be during the winter perhaps adding some blue will help with the atmosphere, and serve to offset the fiery dragon.

Let us see how you're making progress!
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