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sumopiggy junior member
Member # Joined: 06 Dec 2004 Posts: 9 Location: New Zealand
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Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 3:32 am |
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Just signed up
Thought I'd post the progress Ive made in my current project.
Take a look at my other works on my website or my DA gallery
Anyway, I use photoshop 7, a soft round brush and a hard round brush and my tablet
Advice would be great
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Naeem member
Member # Joined: 13 Oct 2004 Posts: 1222 Location: USA
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Posted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 12:44 pm |
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coming along good sam. i look forawrd to seeing this finished. very heavily based on fantasy and i love it! great use of lighting, and it reminds me of something. dont know wat. but something good  |
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Misc member
Member # Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 475 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 3:44 am |
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looks dramatic, and very fantasy. Would have been nice to see a dragon or something flying around there... Only crit is that the clouds to the right look somewhat too solid, and the saturated dark blue on the closest ones is a bit too much imo.. Keep it up! |
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dhood member
Member # Joined: 08 Dec 2003 Posts: 146 Location: United States
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Posted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 1:35 pm |
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I like it, it looks like you've put alot of work into it. It has alot of depth.
I agree with Misc on the blue though.
Good job. |
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sumopiggy junior member
Member # Joined: 06 Dec 2004 Posts: 9 Location: New Zealand
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 2:55 am |
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Thanks alot guys
I'm collaborating with a friend and he's painting a space ship to go in the pic Cant wait to see it
Heres an update, probably the last you'll see before the ship goes in, I think its finished.
Still anything suggestions would be great
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Naeem member
Member # Joined: 13 Oct 2004 Posts: 1222 Location: USA
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 3:03 am |
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hey sam...
WOW! great work man. im loving looking at this. listen, I think the stars in the foreground (the little specks) r too big. u shuold leave the big stars but fade in the little ones in the foreground. keeps teh attention up ahead, and makes u enjoy the whole beauty of the piece  |
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sumopiggy junior member
Member # Joined: 06 Dec 2004 Posts: 9 Location: New Zealand
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 4:15 am |
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Ok heres a colour mod.
Lol I dont know which one I like better
Opinions please.
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perix junior member
Member # Joined: 05 Jan 2004 Posts: 13 Location: over here!
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 7:33 am |
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I like the last more. I don't like th greens taht much. _________________ 'Ik worstel en kom boven' |
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dhood member
Member # Joined: 08 Dec 2003 Posts: 146 Location: United States
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 8:25 am |
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I like the first one better. The second ones nice, but it looks like a quick color correction was made. It makes it lose its quality, imo. All those brush strokes, just to throw it through color correction seems a waste of time to me. If you did that to the first one, I cant really see it, so Id stick with the first one.
Good job. Is this going to be a print? |
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sumopiggy junior member
Member # Joined: 06 Dec 2004 Posts: 9 Location: New Zealand
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 7:34 pm |
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thanks for your opinions
Maybe it just looks like a quick colour correction because you've seen the first version I could work on that brushing in more colours here and there if thats what you think was needed and if thats the version I go for.
And yes it will be available for prints You'll be able to view it here when I put it up http://samart.neoartists.net/go/adven/print/ |
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Naeem member
Member # Joined: 13 Oct 2004 Posts: 1222 Location: USA
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Posted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 7:39 pm |
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hey sam. i like the first one more . more variation and all... just looks better. |
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The Real Mark member
Member # Joined: 13 Dec 2003 Posts: 322 Location: Brisbane Australia
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Posted: Sat Dec 11, 2004 5:51 am |
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I like the second one more, I thought I was looking at mountains at first wihtout the stars... Second one feels more spacey to me. |
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