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sumopiggy
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 3:32 am     Reply with quote
Just signed up Smile
Thought I'd post the progress Ive made in my current project.
Take a look at my other works on my website or my DA gallery Smile
Anyway, I use photoshop 7, a soft round brush and a hard round brush and my tablet Smile
Advice would be great Very Happy

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Naeem
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 12:44 pm     Reply with quote
coming along good sam. i look forawrd to seeing this finished. very heavily based on fantasy Wink and i love it! great use of lighting, and it reminds me of something. dont know wat. but something good Smile
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Misc
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 07, 2004 3:44 am     Reply with quote
looks dramatic, and very fantasy. Would have been nice to see a dragon or something flying around there... Only crit is that the clouds to the right look somewhat too solid, and the saturated dark blue on the closest ones is a bit too much imo.. Keep it up!
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dhood
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 1:35 pm     Reply with quote
I like it, it looks like you've put alot of work into it. It has alot of depth.
I agree with Misc on the blue though.
Good job.
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sumopiggy
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 2:55 am     Reply with quote
Thanks alot guys Very Happy
I'm collaborating with a friend and he's painting a space ship to go in the pic Smile Cant wait to see it Smile
Heres an update, probably the last you'll see before the ship goes in, I think its finished.
Still anything suggestions would be great Very Happy
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Naeem
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 3:03 am     Reply with quote
hey sam...

WOW! great work man. im loving looking at this. Very Happy listen, I think the stars in the foreground (the little specks) r too big. u shuold leave the big stars but fade in the little ones in the foreground. keeps teh attention up ahead, and makes u enjoy the whole beauty of the piece Very Happy
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sumopiggy
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 4:15 am     Reply with quote
Ok heres a colour mod.
Lol I dont know which one I like better Confused
Opinions please. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 7:33 am     Reply with quote
I like the last more. I don't like th greens taht much.
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dhood
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 8:25 am     Reply with quote
I like the first one better. The second ones nice, but it looks like a quick color correction was made. It makes it lose its quality, imo. All those brush strokes, just to throw it through color correction seems a waste of time to me. If you did that to the first one, I cant really see it, so Id stick with the first one.
Good job. Is this going to be a print?
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sumopiggy
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 7:34 pm     Reply with quote
thanks for your opinions Smile
Maybe it just looks like a quick colour correction because you've seen the first version Smile I could work on that brushing in more colours here and there if thats what you think was needed and if thats the version I go for.
And yes it will be available for prints Very Happy You'll be able to view it here when I put it up Very Happy http://samart.neoartists.net/go/adven/print/
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Naeem
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 7:39 pm     Reply with quote
hey sam. i like the first one more Smile. more variation and all... just looks better.
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The Real Mark
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 11, 2004 5:51 am     Reply with quote
I like the second one more, I thought I was looking at mountains at first wihtout the stars... Second one feels more spacey to me.
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