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Hiipi junior member
Member # Joined: 04 Sep 2003 Posts: 24 Location: Finland
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Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2004 7:29 am |
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I guess this is finished enought to be posted here. Though I have changed few bits in it already (the "hole" where the man lies in, the first pic) I still am not sure weather I should add these illustrational backgrounds, as shown below, or not... You guys might help me decide. And the title isn�t what it is supposed to be. I used ink with brush and a nib (hmm.. is that the right expression???), pastels, charcoal, and Photoshop to touch up a bit.
C&C of course appreciated.
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frantic member
Member # Joined: 01 Feb 2004 Posts: 127 Location: istanbul
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Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2004 6:04 pm |
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really good work... coloring and everything is just right...and also story telling. I wonder why noone replied to this post..anyways..
I think however the one with the dragon background looks good, I dont think its necessary to use it...cos it might kill the secret I think... the reader should see it all of a sudden when the dragon comes alive...uif u draw one on a background it can ruin the whole thing...dont know, thats just me:)
cool comic, keep up. _________________ Emir YARDIMCI
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Capt. Fred member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 2002 Posts: 1425 Location: South England
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Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 3:06 am |
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Yeah, I'd leave out the background too. It's a very nice drawing but� not for the background.
Like the comic. |
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