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Misc member
Member # Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 475 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 1:17 pm |
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C&C welcome

Last edited by Misc on Fri Nov 12, 2004 8:03 am; edited 2 times in total |
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Rogosh junior member
Member # Joined: 07 Mar 2004 Posts: 5
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Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 2:22 pm |
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I really like the color and reflections you've painted, but I believe the hovering robotic "ball" is to much of a focal point in the composition. The unsteadyness of the lines on the robot playing the "piano" contrast to the clean ones on the ball are also distracting. I hope you don't take offense to this. I just thought you would appreciate some comments on your work.  |
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Misc member
Member # Joined: 04 Jun 2004 Posts: 475 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 4:59 pm |
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Thanks for the fast reply! I tried to adress your comments by giving the piano man some more contrast, and, well, flipping the image.. made some other changes too.. |
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