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insanelight
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My latest work, done in Painter 8 with my new Intuos 2 tablet.
This Wacom is fantastic for details! 
Ok, this piece took me a lot of time to complete so I hope you like it.
Original resolution 4497*4672 px.
C&C are welcome.
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insanelight
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| Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2004 11:10 am |
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200 views and ZERO replies... is this so bad?
If you think this is bad I would like to know why, I would like to read some opinions, crits or compliments... this is a FORUM, or not? 
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helltaxi
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| Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2004 11:39 am |
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| its a neat idea, but it seems a bit over rendered, my eye is going all over the place. Try it out with a color scheme and maybe a focal point? |
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insanelight
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| Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2004 9:07 am |
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Hi helltaxi and thank you for the reply and crits.
What do you mean with "over rendered"?
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dhood
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| Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2004 12:23 pm |
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| Its really nice, but theres no texture to it. Everything feels the same. |
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insanelight
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| Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2004 8:40 am |
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You are totally right dhood.
My attention was focused on colors and details and this is a my personal mistake.
I'll keep it in mind for next images 
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CalicoRabbit
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| Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2004 4:17 pm |
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I'm not sure if this is what this what helltaxi is refering to but it doesn't seem to have any focal point. Everything is in focus, everything is competing to be looked at, at the same time.
Also, everything is in the same spacial plane, there is not much depth.
I would try to bring more depth to it, more perspective. Have things, like the heart and hand, overlap other things, for instance his chest or something like that. Try punch it out into 3 dimentions, think of his features as 3D objects as oposed to features to be painted on.
I know I'm not the best person to be giving advice on this but I hope this helps,
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