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Dery
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Here are some more of my colors over Dub's pencils. Comments and critiques, please.
Lineart by Dub:
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Gort
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| Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2004 12:15 pm |
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Well executed - I like it, although his left hand looks flat.
What about the guys in the background? They're kinda lost back there and hardly noticable.
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Kid blues
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| Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2004 1:15 am |
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wow, you guys realy got a style. the line art is awesom!! and the color is painted with skill! however i think the background of the coloured image is not as good as the pencil drawing. maybe you need to make the hills blurer.
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| Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2004 3:08 am |
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luv the rain and the way his hair defies the water .. wicked pic .. altho the creased and wrinkles in his clothing seem to be over the top.
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Dery
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| Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2004 9:22 am |
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Thanks for the comments guys.
Kid blues: Good idea with the hills.
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SekiRyuu
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| Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2004 4:36 pm |
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umm...y r ppl drawing swords on the characters' right hip....wouldnt it be kinda hard to use the sword that way? lol
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Kid blues
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| Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2004 5:28 pm |
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SekiRyuu: Hey, the tough guy is left handed. 
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SekiRyuu
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| Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2004 5:39 pm |
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possible, but not likely, lol
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