[Misc]

C&C welcome.

[math]

my first thought was: oh batmobile,cool. my 2nd thought was...its so blurred...and whats that stuff on the top of the car? and its so dark
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[AndyT]

Yeah you should fix the perspective issues and separate the car from the background.

And make sure the form of the car reads well. The value range is huge.
And in many areas the value difference should be more subtle.

The wheels look better than rest IMO.
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Thanks for the replies!
This was a try to render a car in some way, I've just been trying to experiment my way through... I'll try to make it more distinguishable.
But I'm not not sure what you mean with the perspective issues, I'd appreciate a more detailed explanation

[AndyT]

I can't really say what it is about the perspective that looks wrong.
I guess the motor area seems to point to the right:


Not sure though.
Did you use construction lines?
Perspective Section Drawing Tutorial 1
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I think you're right about that! Maybe I screwed it up halfway.. I was only going to try some custom brushes, and it became a car, so I didn't use any construction lines ... Anyway thanks for the tutorial, need to start using perspective lines more seriously.
This is how it looked in an earlier stage, I'm not sure, but looks more correct to me

[allpetter]

Misc.
You are getting better.

I think you concentrated to much on how to "shade" the car.
Know the material you are painting, study cars alot.
Keep on painting from reference.

Pretty readable reflections. That's good.

keep it up
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Thanks Petter, I'll do that. I tend to get hung up on details before the overall shape is set. I guess mostly because I'm not sure how it's supposed to look.