[The Real Mark]

Hey guys

This is a concept painting for a scooter game (like mario kart but on scooters), and I was wondering how to make it... better

The idea is to have it looking like the forest on the moon of endor, Star Wars Episode 6. Though not a blatant rip off as we will have it go through some waterfalls and maybe some caves.

The dirt doesn't really look like dirt. Mainly want to get the track looking more like a track.

Also any other tips would rock!!!

Overpaint parties are welcome!

[Heysoos]

hmmm, one thing that bothers me is how everything is really blurry and undetailed with the exception of the light beams breaking through the trees which are very sharply defined. try building up some more focus and detail on a few key parts and softening the light a tad.

[The Real Mark]

Cool thx

Yeah I think the light is a bit much, I'll try making it whiter aswell. I'll detail up the track i think alot too. Also I think i might make the track go somewhere or put something where the track appears to be turning off to.