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koshime
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2004 2:00 am     Reply with quote
Here is a preliminary sketch of the imagined ancient city of Carthage.
I woudl appreciate some feedback and critique on how to improve the painting furthermore.

Thank you


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2004 8:47 am     Reply with quote
wow...it just looks so...BIG
i love it man keep at it
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2004 6:28 pm     Reply with quote
Lookin good so far. maybe put that tower in the foreground a tad bit more to the right.
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koshime
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2004 10:29 pm     Reply with quote
Good Point, I'll move the focal point of interest off to the right a tad
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