[mpm10]

I am in the initial stages for this work. I would like to get good pointers on the general areas of the picture before continuing further. There are many details to be completed so please don't dwell on the fine details just yet....



Thanks for your help in finishing this work.

[faeklone]

Step 1: Make your display image easily viewed by the majority of web viewers (Smaller then what you have displayed)

Step 2: Don't commit to features so fast, espescially when the rest of the picture is in the beginig stages. Only commit to vague ares of colour and slowly up the detail on the whole image. (Espescially talking about the hair)

Step 3: Where the hell is her breasts? IF they're an A cup, then maybe that picture would look right, but otherwise, it looks odd.

Step 4: Figure out why I'm using steps..............

[bagelguillotine]

Other than the hair, I'd say just thicken up the neck a little--it doesn't really look natural at the moment. If you were ignoring parts of it because they'll be covered in hair, it's generally a good idea to sketch out the whole figure without hair or clothes before you begin.
Also, reexamine the wrinkles in her shirt--somehow, it looks a little too two-dimensional.
Possibly rethink the color of the bathing suit? Not completely necessary, but it does sort of fade with the water.

Nice job on the thighs, and I really think the breasts are fine--it's a baggy shirt. Just as long as you make it clear that they're having some impact on the wrinklage (word?). Good start.

[Warhead82]

ya she is flat as a board.
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