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urbunner
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 3:14 am     Reply with quote
cd cover assignment for school. Just wanted some input on what could be improved.
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xzacto
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Location: Rochester, New York (farmington)

PostPosted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 3:36 pm     Reply with quote
=\ not exactly the model christian image....
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faeklone
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 24, 2004 12:36 am     Reply with quote
two things:

1. Figure out your light source. in this pic it's all over the place.

2. Play with foreshortening and anatomy. The head doesn't look like it belongs witht he body, the chest looks odd compared to the hips and legs, and the far leg isn't even attached to the body.

Overall CD concept, I don't know if the little bit at the top is wrking for jus the front label. I mean, it makes sence when applied to the back like it is, but on the cover it doesn't really. and you don't need the connection with that texture witht eh front and the back. The idea of a torture chamber does it automaticially. On the back, the band name, would be nice, and also a better location for the text. DOn't worry about writing over pictures. Just make it look good.
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 24, 2004 8:36 am     Reply with quote
add leading to the back song list, give the words some breathing space..

whats the album called?
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