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[YOYO]
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drunken_muse
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| excellent lineart, love her torso. the arm to the left has some weird foreshortening though. it seems its almost the same perspective angle as the other arm, but still alot shorter. It's 07am and I might be mistaking, but shouldnt it be the other way around? still, kickass. love the modest wrinkles. waist down she looks like something htk (korean artist) would draw, atleast the tattoo & shoes. |
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Kamal
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| Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2004 11:17 pm |
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I especialy like her face.
Critiques: I think her shoulders seem a bit too masculine for my taste and I think her hips need more fat. |
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Matthew
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| Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 6:53 am |
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Yea nice one. Maybe you could follow that stroke as the wall to the bottom, that way it would look like the wall is in front of the girl. Could maybe solve that foreshortening on the arm.
Anyway nice stuff. 
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| Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 9:19 am |
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| I'm finding this drawing very impressive, I like the way the cloth flows and folds naturally, and I like the costume in general the definition of form is just great! |
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Nazarov
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| Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 10:18 am |
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Looks great, a very natural pose. The abdominal is lovely.
Crit> The tricep of the right hand is abit off, and the perspective with the arm lacks depth.
love your work, please give us more
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Teeb Thoj
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| Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 1:28 pm |
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| Very nice. I like the blend of realistic figure rendering and anime style facial features. |
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[YOYO]
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| Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2004 7:39 pm |
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Thanks for all the comments and crits. I think painting it up will reduce confusion on the foreshortening of the arm. I aimed to emphasize some of the structure on this one on purpose, just make things more interesting. Thanks for the imput.
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