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Mangesan
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 Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2003 3:37 am |
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Made a digital portrait of an old sketch... Don't know if it's much for the world, but I think I'm progressing in my digital experiences. 
Any pointers would be appriciated... 
Peace
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FallDamage
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| Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2003 4:34 am |
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| Hi, I think you did good work on this. Many portions of your final piece have an almost photographic look to them, especially the clothing, I find. Her left eye kind of stands out to me; the curvature of the eye downward towards her nose seems a bit too drastic. Also, there's something about her smile that seems a bit crooked, as though it is too high on her right and too low on her left. Also, her left eyebrow looks much smaller than her right. Beyond these few minor inconsistancies, it looks really great. You should color it. |
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Mangesan
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| Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2003 5:11 am |
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You're absolutely right... Don't know how I could have missed it.. 
I'll fix it soon enough and edit the post...
Thank you so much FallDamage!
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