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LIMBAUL
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heres a chatacter i am working on for my demo,he is a sea guardian,, crits are welcome that why im here lol 
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| Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2003 4:05 pm |
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LIMBAUL
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| Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2003 4:06 pm |
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| Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2003 5:54 pm |
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very nice.  the close up of the head and torso inspires me. |
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| Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2003 2:35 am |
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| well done. good work. NICE |
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| Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2003 2:37 am |
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well done. good work. NICE
oh yeah, and crit-wise: U wanna make is head look more EVIL! 
Lower his brow over his eyes some more, , his eyes closed more could do it. You're the artist tho. I just think at the mo he might not look like he's necsarily bad ass. |
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LIMBAUL
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| Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2003 2:58 am |
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thanks but he is a good guy, i was makeing him look honorable, the guy he is fighting well be evil hehehe 
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| Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2003 4:27 am |
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| It came across that he was not evil, and that is what you wanted, well then you got it spot on! Great stuff |
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| Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2003 7:13 am |
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This is excellent.
I didn't notice anything on first glance.. but, I do have some "questions" about it and if you want to improve it then I'd look into these areas, and make sure they are the way you want them:
The waist line. Too narrow? Too high?
Sharp angle under his right arm pit. This very rarely occurs in real figure but I guess it could be possible.
Sharp crease on far right head, and lines.. not sure I like this.
Top of back view. I know there is an inverted triangle muscle there but I don't think it shows. Still something looks off in that area. It might help to add more detail.
He's got really big muscles but the arm looks simplified. I wonder if there wouldn't be some smaller muscles in those forms. I'd especially double check attachments, depths, and positions.
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I dont have any muscle photos so I couldn't check any of this.
Some other questions:
If he's a good guy then I wouldn't reduce the size of his head. This imples he's not intelligent (ie smaller brain). But, you can always break stereotypes and that might be interesting or maybe you did this for some other information.
I'm not sure he really says "sea-hero" or something to that nature. The snake looks cool on him but nothing really says to me this guy can swim.
The sea-shells look good, and the emblem. But you might want to make it more apparent. Also, if you are going to use say spikes on his back then try to incorporate them in some other ways too.
Boots for swimming, hmm. Nice incorporation of the sandle-style though, but I'd go for probably barefoot with fin blades.
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Well this is exellent work, and I had to try a little harder to make this constructive, and some things may not apply depend on purposes/ideas in mind.
Excellent work again.
(ps: to a few people: Don't worry. I made this post, post-humoursly, and have indeed quit for good, and its nice on the outside.) |
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| Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2003 9:08 am |
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That's awesome, and it has great anotomy, but one thing bugs me, it looks like he has a bulge... between his legs, and this is cool is you want him really realistic, but... do you have to make him so well-endowed? I mean woah!  easy there big fella! |
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| Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2003 9:54 am |
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fitting that doctorDONG should be the one to notice.  |
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LIMBAUL
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| Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2003 2:15 pm |
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hey guys thanks alot for the feed back, heres an update, i think its done,and hope fully th buldge isnt as bad lol, and i well do some tweekin, thanks light
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| Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2003 3:00 pm |
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| Looks awesome..but are you going to texture it? |
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LIMBAUL
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| Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2003 3:25 pm |
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thanks he well be textured and animated fighting a giant sea beast, i just made them those colors so people would know what the armour well be like
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| Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2003 6:05 pm |
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| Ah, very cool! |
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