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Herman
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 Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2003 2:21 pm |
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Hey,
This is my first post here at sijun, although I've been reading here for a long time i haven't decided to register until now.
I thought I'd introduce myself,
My name is Herman, (obviously  ) I just turned 16 (yesterday actually  ) and I live in Stockholm, Sweden.�
I guess you could say I just started out with digital art.
Although I've been playing around for a pretty long time, the last few weeks my interest in digital art has grown greatly and I've started to make pics for "real".
Thought I'd post my latest pic I've been working on, the story for this one is pretty strange It's a cow who has died and gone to heaven where she cleans oranges of the ground with the help of a vacuum cleaner attached to her back..
Pic is made with Illustrator 10, I've put about 5 hours of work into it from idea to the stage it is at now
the pic:
I'm planning on adding another cow, and of course the oranges 
Any comments and critics are welcome =)
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AndyT
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| Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2003 2:32 pm |
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I like it. Great style and imagination! Strange story indeed! 
Just the colors are pretty bright.
Maybe that wouldn't bother me if the composition was different.
The left and the right half kinda compete for attention.
Somehow my eyes always are led to the middle of the image.
The other cow and the oranges might help.
But the image might get too busy ...
And the image shows too much of the sky for my taste.
Btw happy belated birthday! Keep posting!
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Herman
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| Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2003 2:38 pm |
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Oh yeah, forgot to tell you, the pic is made on a laptop so there may be colour issues thank you for pointing that out though, I will check it out as soon as I get hold of a real monitor =)
I'll look into the sky/ground porportions as well, and as you said, we'll se if the balance between right and left is evened (err spelling?) when another cow is added =)
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