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echo
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Ylla
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nice start. i really like the art noveau smoke. i don't know if the hair works like that though. it's shape is not too hair-like, and the ends that stick out at the top aren't as graceful as the rest of the picture. perhaps more undulations, variations in direction, strokes, etc would help 
also, the thingie she's holding, as pretty as it is, it kinda blends into the background. and i mean both the yellow and the green parts do.
otherwise very pretty. the flowers in the back, the smoke, her clothing, all work very well
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| Posted: Sat Aug 30, 2003 3:15 pm |
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yap i have see your site you relly manage to make very good art nouveau compositions keep developing this one it is looking great so far =)
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| Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2003 11:29 am |
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Hey good work! It really caught my eye. No crits.
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| Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2003 4:22 pm |
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yes this is wonderful! Post it in the finished forum or on your site when you have it completed it. and your site is very nice 
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| Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2003 5:37 pm |
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| I think it's great. Being a huge Mucha fan and all. heh. You do real nice work. The only thing bugging me is the hard ass dark line on the left side of her face. That may be a temporary thing and if so carry on..... |
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| Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2003 9:40 pm |
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| will be looking forward to the final product. |
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echo
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| Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2003 11:13 am |
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Hey folks - here's an updated pic (I updated the file, so the one you see above, is the newer version.)
echo
Thanks for the great comments, btw. Closing in on it, so crits welcome.
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