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maxetormer
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 20, 2003 1:59 am     Reply with quote
This is and idea i had this afternoon, some kind of futuristic-cyborg female knigt (one of her arms is mechanic) like a templar knigth on the future =)

I kinda needed to draw someting on medieval time, but i wanted some sifi too so this is what my head cooked up =)

commets and opinions on this image more than wellcome as usual.

I prolly will color it but i wanna hear some opinions first =) see ya =)

i am working on her this one it is old but ill get to finish it a soon as i can
i better put here the most updated pic i have:


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PostPosted: Wed Aug 20, 2003 4:28 am     Reply with quote
Even if she is a cyborg it would give great appeal to the character if she had more accurate anatomical features.

The only other thing that snags my eye is her belt around her skirt should tension the material more on her left side.

Perhaps when finished the background will be more appealing but as I see it now this image would look better if the items in the background were closer to the main character but this would turn the image vertical.

Hopes my two cents helped, Wink
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 20, 2003 3:12 pm     Reply with quote
If you can make the legs a bit longer they look really short right now.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 22, 2003 7:35 pm     Reply with quote
mOO: yup u are right the legs look some how off (dunno why did not realize of that, he he thanks for the heads up)

Jost: your two cents are very apreciated (yeah the bakg. will be like a very dark sea with stormings clousd but now i decided to make the format less horizontal.

This is the last sckech i did of the felmale knight, (i hope that now she has a more acurated anothomical features.) commets and opinions as usual are wellcome, this is an in progress skech i will clean up the lines some more to finish up the details on the armor, and the robotical arm.

constructive commets and opinions are as usual very much wellcome
thanks for the feedback Very Happy


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PostPosted: Fri Aug 22, 2003 8:46 pm     Reply with quote
this is some detailing on the caracter i problably will make some small diferent compsitions before i do the painting to find a compostion that looks real good

what do u guys think of the caracter so far?

see ya Very Happy


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PostPosted: Sat Aug 23, 2003 2:36 pm     Reply with quote
I think those shades are a bit too intence. At least some of them (i.e. the face, neck and chest.
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