[Linguar Amadala]

Well at least a demoness was the intent



Not sure what to make of it though :/ -- her left hand could use some work...

C&C appreciated,

-Linguar

[Anthony]

Best advice at this point is just keep practising, and study anatomy. Keep at it!
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[Linguar Amadala]

What's good practice anyway ^^; -- I normally don't do anything but draw... -- It'd help a bit if you'd perhaps suggest where to focus the most ^_^;

[mOO]

http://www.villagephotos.com/viewpubimage.asp?id_=3590990

Didn't really change much looking pretty good just changed the eyes a bit looked like they were at an odd angle. Smoothed the lines out to make her a bit more feminine.. other than that the only thing that bothers me is her right leg the way its bent seems near impossible to me. Keep going

[Teemu Er�maa]

There are minor things which catches the eye. I know it's hard to notice things when your eyes get used to the picture when making it

Her bikini string shouldn't go like that under the finger.
_Her_ left breast is also wawing odd to the side because of the string.
The problem with her left hand is that the angle is wrong and the fingers don't follow her thigh. Take a pose in front of a mirror (or if you're a guy, get a chick somewhere) and study that.
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[signed by J.Leo]

Well i can say alot on this curtain sketch but i will just say this, that her left shoulder is off (unporportional), it kind of looks like she has a should pad on.
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