[neoaxd]

Both of these pictures were drawn by my girlfriend and colored by me.




(Unfinished)

Any comments and critics would be much appreciated, don't be afraid to be harsh, it really helps you improve. ^^'
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[AndyT]

Were both drawn from reference?
Both images have a lot of potential IMO.
And I like the color palette (plus the colors are not too saturated).

Maybe The first one would look cooler against a darker background.
Her left arm is the biggest problem I think.
And the Face is weird somehow ...

The 2nd one would be a lot cooler if the legs were longer
(or at least would appear to be longer).
The torso seems streched too much.

Also I'd try to get rid of black lines in the coloring process.
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