Sijun Forums :: View topic - Gangster-submission,please leave comments!

varg · Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2003 4:47 pm

As you can see his name is "Fat-louie",,,well,cause he is fat..and stuff.
Please leave any sort of feedback and comments! realy,I need it,cause I got pretty happy with this one.....
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Critical Pete · Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2003 9:33 pm

"Please leave any sort of feedback and comments! realy,I need it,cause I got pretty happy with this one....."

It's like you're guilty that you're feeling good about your work and you need someone to bash you for it... Rolling Eyes

Really this is very good, and that is my feedback. But then, in an image as stylized as this, there's not much you can criticize.

MCnasto · Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2003 12:34 am

nice compostion.... but he looks a little "cutesy" for a gangster i think. Rolling Eyes

and he's "FAT" louie isnt he? where's that old double-chin or fat cheeks?
and his ponch could stand out a bit more...

i did a quick paintover.. hope you dont mind Smile

i think he should look sumthin like that personally...
but hey, its your style. good stuff Smile

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varg · Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2003 4:01 am

hhehe,great work! Smile

He looks a bit fatter now,and a bit more like an outlaw.

But he is a gangster,working for the best of the best.
And its more of a nickname,he is fat,indeed.But not realy fat,they just call him that...

Anyway,great rework,its realy funny Smile

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