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Author   Topic : "The birthday of a CG artist - please critique"
KGBman
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PostPosted: Fri May 30, 2003 12:26 pm     Reply with quote
Well, here it is.. my first artwork posted at this forum. I'm still kina new to this, so I would appreciate any and all comments you may have.

http://www25.brinkster.com/aleksey/sijun/birthday.htm[/u]

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KGBman
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PostPosted: Fri May 30, 2003 12:29 pm     Reply with quote
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PhatTexta
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PostPosted: Sat May 31, 2003 8:11 am     Reply with quote
is it meant to be u? =]
nah my critique would be to make it more clear define some edges etc
good luck
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Max
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 08, 2003 11:45 pm     Reply with quote
like PhatTexta said!
you should choose another brush.
a softbrush with 100% hardness and 80% opasity should do it.

Keep on. The idea behind this is nice!
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lafolli
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 09, 2003 7:07 am     Reply with quote
That picture isnt showing up for me Sad
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