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pulpy ze brachypelman · Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2003 6:09 pm

it'd be in the speedpainting thread, but i really need c&c, so... it's up to you know Very Happy

AndyT · Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2003 6:48 pm

I love it.

The only thing I can think of is that the attention is kinda drawn to the shower head and the spider.
If you did that on purpose it's very mean to say the least Wink

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Soak · Posted: Sat Mar 29, 2003 3:46 am

um yes the spider destroys the great perspective.What about drawing a spider hanging over her head.

Max · Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2003 7:45 am

oh, I like the spider like it is Smile

Novacaptain · Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2003 12:04 pm

nice work, i like the expression a lot. I'm not very fond of the "hairy" outline however it looks like you go over it a lot more than you have to... I made a little paintover to address a possible composition issue:

Perhaps this composition works better (?) Although the 3 intersecting lines are a bit of a focal point now. And the spider isn't lurking in the roof anymore Razz

I hope i've done more good than harm in any case.
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pulpy ze brachypelman · Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2003 4:02 pm

thanxx all Smile

Novacaptain>>you've just done the pic has it had to be !!!! you correction is really what this pic must be !! soooo cool !!!!!!!

aColdOldKodiak · Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2003 4:10 pm

Nova Cap'n Save da day! Hip hip, Hooray!
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