[lunayasha]

This is a business card I did for my computer graphics class please critque.

http://www.villagephotos.com/pubbrowse.asp?selected=196226

[Soak]

1.

stop using filters

2.

stop using lensflares

3.

Take care of grammar

4.

stop using lensflares

5.

stop using lensflares

6.anti alias the outlines

7.

stop using lensflares

[Capt. Fred]

I'd say take care with composition and stuff
At the moment it is FAR too busy. Clean it up, clear it up.
Text needs to be 100% readable, clear, clarity is thing, what you want.
However cool the designs and stuff are, if you can't read/see what's going on, well, you can't appreciate the work you put in to the elements individually.

[DL-44]

On top of the excellent advice given above, let me add this -

Simplfy!

this is a business card, not a movie poster. Lose the bevels (eye candy?), lose the lens flare, and get some actual CURVES into your forms.

Add contrast, and lose the jumble of...."stuff".

[lalPOOO]

compared to what my little sister could do, it doesn't suck. However, i think you should continue to work at making graphics, but if you do continue to make stuff of this level of quality...I'm sure theres another forum that'd apperciate it much more :p

Its not terrible, work on the text in the lower area, it doesn't look like you put much time into playing with the settings. Also, doing what was mentioned above (what the other people said) will help too.

[yobarman]

8. Stop using lens flare!

[B0b]

standard Business Card size is 85mm x 55mm