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acrynick
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 Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2003 6:16 am |
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hope to catch up with you all. Comments.
Last edited by acrynick on Thu Mar 13, 2003 10:38 am; edited 2 times in total |
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Randis Albion
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| Posted: Fri Feb 21, 2003 6:39 am |
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I like the color and composition.
The anatomy is very deformed...
Just looks not right somehow.
The necks seems to be placed wrong and the arms much to tiny.
I would not over do it with the style...
Layput is not very good, you should place the fond a different way.
the Y should not touch her head.
The legs don`t fit the style, looks like they do not belong to her.
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acrynick
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| Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2003 11:06 am |
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| i agree with you randis. The leg and the belly is the worst mistake i make. I really got shit out of there.Yeah i think the style should be more subtle...now it's too heavy.I really didn't thought about the font part, yu relly make sense now.I will be more careful next time.Thanks for pointing it out.Really appreaciate it.Cheers. |
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gezstar
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| Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2003 11:41 am |
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| I actually love the stylization of this - and the colours are so nice!! Take the first crit with a grain of salt, a lot of this stuff (especially when this stylized) is a matter of personal preference. The one thing I think you might do is make her foot a lot longer/extend to the bottom of the page to balance the figure out. Nicely done acrynick. |
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acrynick
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| Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2003 9:50 am |
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| thanks gezstar...As always the problem with her ...the leg!! |
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