[Probustion]

Hi guys, here's something i'm working at. Looks a little dull ya, but was hoping for some tips on the perspective(because it doesn't look quite right somehow. Anyway, thanks for any crits.



and here's the sketch

[Xyster21]

Well unless that tunnel curves, the hole should be more over to the right. It also looks like the road is tilted to the right some... maybe your strying to go for that lens effect sorta half fisheye look :p
also is the camera on the ground? or hovering just above it?
Vanishing points don't quite match up/or look a little distorted with it.
maybe check those again.
But for sure the end of the tunnel looks wrong with the line on the road. Maybe its just too unfinished to tell quite yet and its playing tricks on me :p
post updates so more ppl can get in and help
gluck!
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[Probustion]

thanks! i'm not sure i'm gonna complete this. I feel i need to learn a little more about perspective before doing this stuff. but anyway, thanks for your help, i think you are right. though the tunnel and the car are both nailed on the same two vanishing points, so it should work actually